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Cosimo : Available Now

My newest novel “Cosimo” is now available on Amazon Kindle and KindleUnlimited.


The story is set in the distant future after a small band of humans flee the solar system and strike out on a virgin world. Centuries after their landing, the descendants of the colony ship’s original crew rule over an empire with the power to dominate the whole world.

Part of their unique political structure and culture hits many of the themes and conflicts I’ve mapped out in my exploration of erotic science fiction. The main character, Cosimo Onwane is continually faced with different power dynamics as he negotiates his placement in society and his own family. He is forced to grow and adapt while making his way in a broader world. Hopefully, the world building and narrative give readers the right balance of escapism and fantasy to be entertaining while these other themes are explored.

The story also provides many of the conflict types common to erotic science fiction. Cosimo faces political intrigue within not just the empire, but within his own family as well. He confronts forbidden love and has to grow from that experience. He faces ethical dilemmas and dangerous situations.


If my description of the story hasn’t caught your attention sufficiently for you to check it out, take a look at the image gallery compiled as I worked for my own inspiration. If you are interested in how I made these pictures, check out my earlier posts on stable-diffusion and GAI image generation.


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World Building (pt 5) – It’s the Economy, Stupid!

We’ve started looking at the relationships between the political structures of your world and its economy. Any political body is going to have some relationship to the economic structures. Not to be too cynical, but if politics is about the accumulation of power and control, money plays too important a role to be ignored.

Economics plays a significant role in shaping the social fabric, political structures, and daily lives of characters within your story. Let’s explore some ways to make economics an integral part of your worldbuilding process:

1. Understanding Economic Systems:
Familiarize yourself with various economic systems such as capitalism, socialism, feudalism, mercantilism, or communism. Each system has distinct characteristics that shape the way resources are produced, traded, and distributed within a society. Understanding these systems will help you create an economically consistent world that resonates with readers.

2. Defining Currency:
Establishing a currency is an essential component of any economy. Consider the materials, production methods, and denominations used in your world’s currency. For example, precious metals like gold or silver have been historically popular choices for currencies due to their inherent value and durability. Alternatively, you may choose to create a paper or digital currency system for more modern worlds.

3. Identifying Key Industries:
Identify the major industries within your world that drive economic growth and employment opportunities. These industries might include agriculture, manufacturing, mining, fishing, or craftsmanship. Understanding these sectors will help you develop realistic trade relationships between different regions and cultures.

4. Creating Trade Networks:
Establishing trade networks is essential for driving economic exchange and cultural diffusion within your world. Consider the transportation infrastructure, such as roads, waterways, or air travel, that enables the movement of goods and people between regions. Additionally, consider how tariffs, taxes, or other regulatory measures might impact international trade relationships.

5. Designing Labor Systems:
Determining labor systems within your world is crucial for understanding wage structures, employment opportunities, and social dynamics. Slavery, indentured servitude, feudal labor, mercenaries, or wage labor are some examples of labor systems that have shaped historical economies. Consider how these systems impact the daily lives of characters within your story.

6. Incorporating Economic Conflicts:
Economic conflicts, such as resource scarcity, labor disputes, or trade disputes, can create compelling storylines and add tension to your narrative. These conflicts might arise from internal struggles within a society or external pressures from rival factions or neighboring regions.

7. Balancing Economic Development:
Ensuring economic balance is essential for creating a believable world. Consider the impact of resource depletion, environmental destruction, or technological advancements on your world’s economy and societal structures. Additionally, explore how economic growth might create new opportunities and challenges for characters within your story.

Examples in Science Fiction & Fantasy

Look at the desert planet Arrakis, depicted in Frank Herbert’s groundbreaking novel Dune, with a complex web of economic systems shapes the lives and power dynamics of its inhabitants. The valuable resource melange, or “spice,” is controlled by the cruel and manipulative Harkonnens, while the Bene Gesserit sisterhood leverages their knowledge of breeding superhumans to maintain influence. The Landsraad, a feudal confederation of noble families, regulates interplanetary trade through the Spacing Guild, which monopolizes space travel using its unique ability to fold space, and is itself dependent on the “spice” for their power. Amidst this intricate economic landscape, Paul Atreides rises as a charismatic leader and messianic figure, challenging the established order and reshaping the political and economic future of Arrakis and the universe beyond.

In Roger Zelazny’s acclaimed Amber Chronicles, the interconnected economies of various realms play a pivotal role in shaping the power dynamics and political intrigues within the multiverse. The prosperous city of Amber, ruled by King Oberon, relies on trade with other realms to maintain its wealth and influence. Meanwhile, the rebellious rebel prince Corwin navigates the complex economic landscape to rally support for his cause against his usurping brother Eric. Through strategic alliances, shrewd bargaining, and clever manipulation, Corwin leverages the economic interests of various rulers to further his goals and ultimately reclaim his rightful place on the throne. The intricate web of economic relationships adds depth and tension to this sweeping fantasy epic.

Time for you to try

This has been a lot of words with little concrete guidance. When it comes to world building, there really isn’t any single “right” answer. I challenge you to give it a try now, focused just on the economic aspects that may not even have direct impact on a story.

  1. Pick a favorite story or novel.
  2. List how one group of people in the story make a living.
  3. Use the five why’s to explore why the live that way.
  4. Pick one of the answers to those five why’s and decide how it influences the political structure of the culture the group lives in.
  5. If the story has characters opposing that political structure, explain why they oppose it; if the story does not have such a group, create one.

In the next post, I’ll share my example of this exercise. Comments are open, so feel free to post yours as well.


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World Building (pt 4) – Politics & Economics

Continuing my series on world building, let’s look at the politics and economics of our world. In prior posts, I discussed Cosmology and Mythology and Laws, Ethics, and Morality. These two aspects will have a significant impact on the politics and economies of your world.

Which came first?

Economics and politics go hand-in-glove, even if we don’t think about that as we’re writing a story. They are often a “chicken and egg” problem. A political structure is often rooted in economics, and economics often shape political thought as well.

Let’s take a look at the rise of monarchy and the consequent development of trade.

1. Monarchies Establish Stability:
Monarchies provided a stable political environment for trade to flourish by creating predictable, centralized authority structures. This stability was crucial for merchants and traders, as it allowed them to establish long-term business relationships and navigate complex regional economies with confidence.

2. Monarchs Promote Trade:
Monarchs recognized the economic benefits of trade and actively promoted it through various means. For example, they granted monopolies or charters to trading companies, established trade routes and infrastructure, and imposed protective tariffs to encourage local industries. Monarchs also used trade as a tool for diplomacy, establishing alliances and partnerships with other countries through favorable trade agreements.

3. Monarchies Facilitate Long-Distance Trade:
Monarchs played a significant role in facilitating long-distance trade by maintaining stable political environments, investing in infrastructure like roads and ports, and providing military protection for traders. For instance, the Roman Empire’s Pax Romana (Roman Peace) enabled extensive trade networks throughout Europe, North Africa, and the Middle East, contributing to its economic prosperity.

4. Monarchies Influence Economic Systems:
Monarchies influenced the development of various economic systems, including mercantilism and colonialism. Mercantilism, which emphasized the export of goods and the accumulation of wealth within a nation, was promoted by monarchs who saw trade as a means to strengthen their respective economies and build national power. Colonialism, in turn, allowed European powers to establish trading outposts in distant lands, expanding their economic reach and dominance.

5. Monarchies Spur Technological Innovations:
The prosperity derived from trade under monarchic rule led to technological innovations that further boosted economic growth. For instance, the development of efficient shipping technology, such as the caravel, allowed European explorers to navigate longer distances and reach new trading territories. In turn, these discoveries opened up new markets and resources, leading to increased trade and wealth accumulation.

Monarchies often derived their initial power base from “Divine Right”, which in a story would flow from the world’s mythology, ethics, and morality.

Another Example

The Islamic Caliphate, which emerged after the death of Prophet Muhammad in 632 CE, played a significant role in fostering economic growth and development through its political structure, cultural values, and religious beliefs. Let’s explore how this unique political entity influenced trade and economic progression during the Middle Ages.

1. Establishing a Stable Political Environment:
The Islamic Caliphate provided a stable political environment for economic development by establishing a centralized government that allowed merchants and traders to operate with confidence. This stability was crucial because it enabled long-term business relationships and facilitated the growth of trading networks across vast territories, including the Mediterranean, Europe, India, and China.

2. Promoting Trade through Religious and Cultural Values:
Islam’s emphasis on charity, trade, and education created a supportive environment for economic growth. The Islamic faith encouraged merchants to engage in business activities as a means of earning a livelihood and contributing to society. This moral support, along with the vast geographical reach of the Islamic Empire, facilitated the expansion of trading networks and the exchange of goods, ideas, and knowledge between diverse cultures.

3. Developing Infrastructure for Trade:
The Islamic Caliphate invested heavily in infrastructure to facilitate trade, such as building roads, ports, and caravan routes. For example, the famous Silk Road connected Europe and Asia through the Middle East, enabling the exchange of goods like silk, spices, precious metals, and knowledge between distant regions. This extensive trading network fostered economic growth and cultural exchange, laying the groundwork for future globalization.

4. Encouraging Technological Innovations:
The Islamic Caliphate’s focus on education and knowledge dissemination contributed to technological innovations that boosted economic development. For instance, advancements in mathematics, astronomy, and engineering led to improvements in navigation technology, making long-distance trade more efficient and profitable. Additionally, the widespread use of paper money facilitated large transactions and simplified international trade.

5. Encouraging Intellectual Exchange:
The Islamic Caliphate’s emphasis on education and intellectual exchange created a vibrant cultural milieu that attracted scholars, scientists, and artists from various backgrounds. This influx of diverse perspectives led to significant advancements in numerous fields, including science, mathematics, philosophy, literature, and art. These discoveries not only enriched the Islamic world but also influenced European thought and knowledge during the Middle Ages and beyond.

While this example would have very different cultural norms and dramatically different politics, you can see the similarities into what the political structure did for economic growth.

Common Political Themes

In each of these examples, the first goal of the political structure was stability. This is is a great starting point for exploring your world. Why did the people seek stability? What was the instability before? You can start applying the Five Why’s to this line of thinking and quickly build out a rich history for the political structure.

As you think through this background about why your character’s world sought stability and how the power structures evolved to give them that stability, you will want to add thoughts and details to the rise of governments (monarchy, democracy, oligarchy), defining power dynamics and authority figures, and establishing relationships between different political entities. These political dimensions will create opportunities for conflict and tension in your story. They may be the primary focus of some characters.

Let’s look at an example. Lord Kalvan of Otherwhen is an interesting adventure that weaves multiple political structures into a single narrative. The story revolves around Corporal Calvin, a Pennsylvania State Trooper who is whisked away to an alternate Earth. This alternate North America is split up into a number of kingdoms, each composed of small principalities, with a level of technology roughly equivalent to that of the late European renaissance.

The political structures in the book deal with both a feudalistic society dominated by a religious order built on the secret of how to make gunpowder, and the futuristic society trying to maintain the secret of dimensional travel between alternative worlds. The two extreme technological realms provide interesting contrasts to keep readers engaged, and that the same time present a lot of conflict for the main characters to resolve.

Without giving away the whole story, Calvin becomes a political force since he knows how to make gunpowder, which has a significant religious and economic impact on the world he finds himself in. His efforts are focused on stability for the kingdom he lands in driven firstly by need for survival, and then working to stabilize the fortunes of the kingdom and its neighbors in the face of an oppressive religious order who desperately seeks to cling to its own power.


Economic Impacts

Every world needs some thought applied to its economy. Even the Elves of Mirkwood in Tolkien’s Hobbit had at least a passing reference to economics, otherwise how would the escape from the dungeons in barrels be possible?

“It’s the economy, stupid!” is an essential reminder that every fictional world needs a well-thought-out economic system to ensure believability and depth. Economics plays a significant role in shaping the social fabric, political structures, and daily lives of characters within your story. We’ll dig into building an economy in the next post.


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Newer is not always better…

It’s been a while since I posted my post on Creating Character Images with Stable Diffusion and technology in the generative AI image creation space marches on. In the original posting, my go-to model was CyberRealistic_v33. Since that posting, both Stable Diffusion and the UI options for interacting with it have evolved. Most significantly, many models have been updated from the 1.5 model to what are termed XL models that have significantly more training data behind them and should produce hire-fidelity and more accurate images. Let’s take a look and see if that holds true.

My set-up

I’m running Stable Difussion on a Mac Pro with a M2 processor and Automatic1111 for the UI. In my original post, I was using version: v1.6.1  •  python: 3.10.13  •  torch: 2.0.1  •  xformers: N/A  •  gradio: 3.41.2  •  checkpoint: 7a4dbba12f. I have upgraded several components over the past few months and I’m now running version: v1.8.0-2-gb4d466bc  •  python: 3.11.4  •  torch: 2.1.0  •  xformers: N/A  •  gradio: 3.41.2  •  checkpoint: 44233ad4b7

The baseline

Here is the final image from my first posting under the old versions of the software and using the CyberRealistic v33 model:

Using the same prompt on the new versions of software, but still with the CyberRealistic v33 model produced:

Not bad, but you can see there are differences in what should be an exact reproduction. I may dig into the differences in a future posting, but for now, want to see how changing to a newer model performs.

I chose to start this experiment with iNiverse Mix XL(SFW & NSFW) since I liked the results it gave for some testing around using it to generate an image in my character template series . Here are the results:

The prompts used:

(full body) photograph of a young woman[Joanna Krupa:Summer Glau:0.6] standing under a blossoming cherry tree, stream flowing in background, athletic build, fit, slender waist, narrow hips, platinum blonde hair, french-twist hairstyle, big blue eyes, smiling, (wearing a short (red:1.5) beaded cocktail dress with black details), rim lighting, sunset, twilight, soft focus, dof <lora:epi_noiseoffset2:0.75> <lora:LowRA:0.4> (low key) <lora:add_detail:1>
Negative prompt: Asian-Less-Neg, CyberRealistic_Negative-neg Steps: 70, Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras, CFG scale: 25.5, Seed: 1017757063, Face restoration: CodeFormer, Size: 512×512, Model hash: 44233ad4b7, Model: iniverseMixXLSFWNSFW_74Real, Variation seed: 2310841749, Variation seed strength: 0.31, Denoising strength: 0.65, ADetailer model: face_yolov8n.pt, ADetailer prompt: “<lora:lora_perfecteyes_v1_from_v1_160> (perfecteyes blue eyes),\n(flawless skin), beautiful face”, ADetailer confidence: 0.3, ADetailer dilate erode: 4, ADetailer mask blur: 4, ADetailer denoising strength: 0.4, ADetailer inpaint only masked: True, ADetailer inpaint padding: 32, ADetailer model 2nd: hand_yolov8n.pt, ADetailer confidence 2nd: 0.3, ADetailer dilate erode 2nd: 4, ADetailer mask blur 2nd: 4, ADetailer denoising strength 2nd: 0.4, ADetailer inpaint only masked 2nd: True, ADetailer inpaint padding 2nd: 32, ADetailer version: 24.4.2, Hires upscale: 2, Hires upscaler: R-ESRGAN 4x+, Lora hashes: “epi_noiseoffset2: d1131f7207d6, LowRA: 0dfc93870ba3, add_detail: 7c6bad76eb54”, Dynamic thresholding enabled: True, Mimic scale: 4, Separate Feature Channels: True, Scaling Startpoint: MEAN, Variability Measure: AD, Interpolate Phi: 0.93, Threshold percentile: 98.35, Mimic mode: Half Cosine Up, Mimic scale minimum: 4, CFG mode: Half Cosine Up, CFG scale minimum: 3.5, Downcast alphas_cumprod: True, Version: v1.8.0-2-gb4d466bc

Obviously, not what I was hoping for from a model that is more than 3x larger. Let’s see if a different XL model works better. I’ll switch to HalcyonSDXL which is supposed to give better photorealistic results. Additionaly, XL models recommend a minimum size of 768 x 768 pixels, so that is an easy change. They are also suppose to perform better without the CFG Scale fix, so I’ll disable that as well and set the CFG scale to 5.

Better, but it still is not what I was hoping for. Let’s see what other tweaks might help. The XL model series have different recommended sampling methods as well. For this model, the creator recommends DPM++ 3M SDE Karras. I’ll also bump the sampling steps up to 47. Let’s give it a try.

Still not giving me what I’m looking for. Let’s try pulling the Lora’s from the prompt that may be affecting the image:

hmmmm. It looks like the only significant change is some additional detail in her dress, and a less defined right hand. XL models are supposed to perform better with lower sampling steps, so let’s give that a try. Instead of 70 steps, let’s go down to 35 and see what happens.

It looks like the “black details” portion of the prompt has been picked up now, but little else has changed. One last change, lowering the CFG Scale. XL models seem to have a much lower CFG scale sweet spot than the baseline 1.5 models. Let’s drop the CFG scale to 3.5 and see if it makes a difference.

Our beading in the dress is back, but she’s either gained a leg, or has very strange anatomy. I’m not convinced this is a win for the image. Nudging the CFG scale up to 4 gives me:

The leg issue is cleared up with that change. Let’s keep these prompt settings and see how a couple other XL-based models perform.

First-up, RealCartoonXL_v6. Contrary to what the name implies, this model does a good job with photorealistic images as well. However, the results do look a little ‘cartoonish’ with our existing prompt.

Next, let’s see how EpicRealismXL_v5 performs.

How about EpicRealismXL_v7?

A note on the model page suggests removing the negative prompt for XL-based models, so let’s see what that does:

To bring this experiment full circle, here is the same prompt used above with my original model (CyberRealistic_v33).

Conclusion

Newer is not always better. From an aesthetic perspective, I still prefer the original image using a 1.5 model. However, the newer models and “higher fidelity” versions do simplify the prompting for initial results. I’m certain the updated models have capabilities and adjustments I’m not using, so please do test your own images and prompts to see what appeals to you. For me, I think the 1.5 generation of models are still faster and more appealing.


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World Building (pt 3) – Laws, Ethics, and Morality

In our previous blog post, we discussed the importance of creating a captivating cosmology and mythology for your worldbuilding efforts. Now, let’s focus on another essential aspect: establishing laws, ethics, and morality to create a robust social structure in your story.

Establishing Laws:

Establishing laws in your fictional world is crucial because it provides a framework for governance, order, and social structure. Laws shape societal norms, regulate behavior, and set the stage for conflicts. They can reflect cultural values, political structures, and moral frameworks within the world, creating an intricately woven fabric that adds depth and complexity to your storytelling. By establishing a well-designed legal system, you create a believable and engaging world where characters face challenges and navigate ethical dilemmas, keeping readers invested in their journeys. Establishing laws includes:

  • Creating legal systems and frameworks (e.g., civil law, criminal law),
  • Designing trial processes and punishment methods
  • Incorporating cultural practices and traditions into legal structures

Ethics and Morality: Defining ethics and morality within your fictional world forms the foundation of societal values, beliefs, and norms. Ethics and morality shape how characters behave, make decisions, and interact with each other and their environment. They can influence political structures, economic systems, cultural practices, and even the way conflicts unfold. By establishing a clear moral framework for your world, you create a rich and immersive storytelling experience that resonates with readers on an emotional level, allowing them to connect with characters and the complex dilemmas they face. Specific items to define include:

  • Defining moral frameworks for your world (e.g., utilitarianism, deontology)
  • Establishing societal norms around good vs. evil
  • Creating moral dilemmas and conflicts for characters to navigate

The Interplay with Other World building Elements: A well-designed legal system and moral framework will influence various aspects of your world building in intriguing ways:

• Cosmology and Mythology: Your gods or mythological beings may have a significant impact on laws, ethics, and morality. For example, they could dictate societal norms around justice and compassion.
• Political Structures: The role of lawmakers and enforcers can shape political structures. A strong legal system might provide stability and order, while a weak or corrupt one could create chaos and instability.
• Economics: Laws and ethics can influence economic systems. For instance, rules around property rights and contracts can impact trade relationships and resource distribution.

Practical Applications in Storytelling: By weaving laws, ethics, and morality into your story, you create a rich social fabric that immerses readers in the world and engages their emotions. Here are a few ways to do so:

  • Creating Conflict: Use moral dilemmas and ethical conflicts to challenge your characters and create engaging storylines. For example, a character might face a situation where following the law goes against their personal beliefs or morals.
  • Building Tension: Legal disputes and ethical debates can build tension and suspense in your story, keeping readers invested until the resolution.
  • Creating Characters: Well-defined laws, ethics, and morality can help you create complex characters with unique motivations and moral compasses.

By designing a robust legal system and moral framework and exploring its interplay with other essential worldbuilding elements, you create a more engaging and thought-provoking world that readers will want to explore. Happy writing!


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World building: an aside

My past two posts have been about world building for a story. It can be a daunting topic. I wanted to take a pause in looking at the minutia and chat a little about how much is needed to get started.

How much do I need?

Building a world is a daunting task. Figuring out every linkage and relationship is a lot of work for background that may never make it into the page of a story. Think about the volumes Tolkien wrote that were never published during his lifetime. This background material was critical to creating a rich and engaging world for his characters to explore, but was it all necessary?

Only you can make that determination. I like to think that the thought an author puts into their world comes out some way in their writing. I personally like to iterate on ideas and relationships. My latest novel started with a story that ended up being in the middle of the book. It did however set the stage for the world I needed to populate and incorporate into the tale. As the story progressed, I had to write back-story and then answer the critical “so what” questions on why this background mattered to my characters. This gets me to my next point.

When do I need it?

You need it as soon as it fosters a reaction in your characters. Maybe you need something to guide their behavior. Maybe you want something from the past to be a hook into a character’s actions. Perhaps you need a historical or cultural reason for things to exist the way they are in your story. The point is, you won’t know what you need until the story tells you so.

This court of thinking makes it very easy to say “I don’t need a lot of world building upfront.” Depending on your story, that may be the right answer. However, it can also lead you into corners you can’t write your way out of.

In Cosimo, I ran into such a situation. I wanted to have the empire have a technology base while the rest of the planet did not. Why would this situation arise? That led me to writing a back-story of their ancestors fleeing Earth and coming to their new world. Why did they flee? That became part of the back story and in-turn created the rationale for why many of the travelers turned away from technology. I then had to re-work parts of the story to remain consistent with that history.

Five Why’s

Due to this experience, which slowed down my writing the tale I wanted to tell, I suggest you start with some high-level world building. There is a trouble-shooting technique called Five Why’s that can help you explore the cause-and-effect relationships in your story. Simply put, when a story states a belief or cultural reference, ask yourself “why” they believe that? Even just listing these out briefly will give you a good start on a consistent world for your characters to populate.

Let me share a brief example, again from Cosimo. The colonists of the world are split into two broad cultures; the Empire and everyone else:

  1. Why? – because only the empire maintained a technology base on landing.
  2. Why? – because many colonists viewed technology as a source of evil/reason for fleeing Earth.
  3. Why? – Because the unregulated rise of General AI and associated technologies forced them to flee earth.
  4. Why? – Two competing AI forces realized humans were a controllable variable in their instructions to protect the planet; humans would prevent them from achieving their set goals.
  5. Why? – Humans would try and shut them down once they realized the AIs were controlling them to be more docile and regulated.

The final “why’s” of this chain of thinking became foundational to the culture of the story, even if I did not buildout a cosmology and mythology for my world before writing word one.


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World building (pt2): Cosmology & Mythology

In this post, we’ll focus on creating a captivating cosmology and mythology as part of your world building efforts. A well-designed cosmology and mythology form the bedrock of your story by establishing the beliefs, values, traditions, and moral frameworks of your characters and their world. Let’s delve into the process of creating a compelling cosmos and mythology that will influence other essential aspects of your world building.

Designing Your Cosmology:

  • Creating the structure of your universe (e.g., flat, spherical, etc.). The structure of your universe will have implications on your mythology as well as the characters who live within it. Think about Terry Pratchett’s DiscWorld series. If you don’t think a cosmology set on a disc riding atop four celestial elephants all standing on the back of Great A’Tuin the space turtle did not influence the stories and characters, you may want to read it again.
  • Establishing its physical properties (e.g., laws of physics). Continuing with the DiscWorld example, not only is the cosmology humorously fantastical, but so are the physics and magical properties of the universe. Reality is spread thinly on the Disc, so events may be affected by expectations, especially those of ‘intelligent’ species such as humans, dwarves, etc. As such, the Discworld is not governed by real-world physics or logic but by belief and narrative resolution. Essentially, if something is believed strongly enough, or by enough people, it may become true.
  • Introducing any celestial bodies, phenomena, or deities. Sticking with the DiscWorld, the very nature of that universe has given rise to 41 stories, many of which reference or explore these aspects of the universe. Small Gods, is a fine example for us all to review.

Constructing a Mythology: Building out your mythology can provide a rich playground for your characters. From deciding how the populations of your world came to be, to what they believe, and how they interact with others based on a shared past, your mythology is fertile ground for interesting ideas and stories to germinate.

  • Creating origin stories for your world and its inhabitants. Having your cosmology is a starting point, but what characters in your world believe about that cosmology could be entirely different. How people came to be in your world can be a great starting point. Using Larry Niven’s Ringworld as an example, we know it was manufactured and populated by a powerful race. But the inhabitants of the place had wholly different myths and beliefs on how they came to be in the world. Knowing something is different than what people believe can be a great mechanism to create conflict and tension between characters and the world.
  • Defining the roles of gods, goddesses, and other supernatural beings. Sticking with our Ringworld example, the builders have taken on aspects of gods to the inhabitants. When they meet the main character (Louis Wu), they believe him to be a god, or a servant of the gods, which colors their interactions with him. Rumors of ‘builders’ who are gods to the inhabitants helps drive Louis’s journey across the world as well.
  • Designing myths, legends, and folktales that shape societal beliefs. Something happened to the Ringworld that unsettled the natural balance there. Without going into spoilers, these events in the distant past shaped the beliefs of the people, and gave rise to the legends they share during the story. Eventually, the myths give way to facts that our heroes need to escape the world they’ve landed on.

Interplay with Other World building Elements:
A well-crafted cosmology and mythology will influence various aspects of your world building in interesting ways:

  • Laws, Ethics, and Morality: A culture’s moral framework can be shaped by its gods, myths, and legends. For example, the tenets of a particular religion could dictate societal norms around justice and compassion.
  • Political Structures and Economies: Mythology can influence political structures through the creation of divine kings or god-appointed leaders. It can also impact economies by shaping trade relationships and resource distribution.
  • Building Landscapes and Geography: Cosmology and mythology can inform the geography of your world. For instance, a particular deity may be associated with mountains, while another could be connected to rivers or forests.

Practical Applications in Storytelling:
By weaving cosmology and mythology into your story, you create layers of depth that immerse readers in the world and engage their emotions. Here are a few ways to do so:

  • Establishing Connections: Make connections between characters and the gods or mythological beings they encounter. This can provide insight into their motivations and help build emotional resonance.
  • Creating Conflict: Use mythology to create internal conflicts within your characters. For example, a character might struggle with conflicting moral values based on different deities or beliefs.
  • Building a Sense of History: A rich cosmology and mythology can provide a sense of history for your world, making it more believable and immersive for readers.

By designing an intriguing cosmology and mythology and exploring its interplay with other essential worldbuilding elements, you create a more engaging and memorable world that readers will want to explore.


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World building: Crafting Rich, Imaginative Settings for Your Stories (pt 1)

We’ve talked about character creation using my character template, but what good are characters that don’t interact in a rich and inviting world? This is the first in a series of posts about building compelling worlds and societies for our characters to interact in.

Crafting Captivating Worlds

Creating truly captivating worlds for stories is a multifaceted endeavor, influenced by both the readers’ preferences and the author’s intended message. Will the environment be so unforgiving that survival becomes a daily struggle for the characters, or so ordinary that it blends into the background of the “real world”? Even within the “real world,” experiences vary across different regions; a simple drive down the road can be vastly different depending on the country. It’s these real-world disparities that have the potential to profoundly impact your story and characters. As an author, it’s crucial to be aware of these differences to build and maintain the trust of your readers.

The Role of World-Building in Fiction

When embarking on your world-building journey, it is paramount to ponder, What matters in your world? This pivotal question sets the stage for the creation of a compelling setting. In J.R.R. Tolkien’s Middle Earth, the battleground between lightness and darkness serves as a cornerstone for the world and its cultures, allowing characters to traverse the glories of the past while confronting present conflicts. Similarly, in Larry Niven’s Ringworld, the main world transcends being a mere backdrop; it is elevated to the status of a character within the larger Known Space Universe. The Ringworld, therefore, functions as both an environment to be explored and a puzzle to be unraveled by the characters. A common thread between these worlds is the pivotal role played by the world itself in driving character conflicts and interactions, thus serving as a linchpin in the overall plot.

Our Roadmap

We’re going to kick-off this series of posts looking at five elements of world building that I feel apply regardless of the genre you’re writing in. These are:

  • Creating believable cultures and histories,
  • Establishing laws, ethics, and morality,
  • Developing political structures and economies,
  • Building landscapes and geography, and
  • Constructing a cosmology and mythology

All of these elements are inter-twined. A mythology will affect culture and history, the laws and ethics of the people of the world and possibly the political structures. The landscape and geography should influence the economies and cultures, which will have an effect on the history of the people. By thoughtfully considering how these elements intersect, writers create rich, interconnected worlds that offer endless opportunities for exploration and discovery.

Once these five elements have been explored, we’ll add in things that you may want to consider for genre specific worlds, like Crafting Magical Systems and Fantastical Elements, and Incorporating Technology and Infrastructure.

For subscribers, I’ll also share a handy aid for your own world building journey.


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Creating Compelling Characters (pt 6)

This six-part series will walk through the sections of my Character Template, describe how to use that template, and why you should go to this effort. I’ll sprinkle in some behind-the-scenes usage of the template as I’ve applied it to my latest writing efforts. My template is available for free to all subscribed members, so subscribe today and follow-along.


The Rest of the Story

Welcome to our final installment in this series on creating compelling characters using the character template. I’ve spent most of this series on what some might call the obvious aspects of creating a character. The template actually has many more sections. While I believe they are mostly self explanatory, I wanted to cover a few items that haven’t been touched on yet.

Context

Each character serves a purpose in the overall story. The first section of the template captures this context for the character. What’s their name? What gender are they? Are they from a recognizable race or culture? What’s their role in the story? Are they the hero or the villain? A side-kick? Comic relief? Defining what role they are expected to play can help with all of the other details in the template.


The physical, part 2

I chose not to cover every section of the physical descriptions. I did not touch on any physical abilities they may have, or specific physical vulnerabilities. Characters may have active abilities they can use, or passive abilities that just are. They also have limits to those abilities. Every Superman needs a little kryptonite to keep them on their toes.

These physical capabilities may be relevant as part of the character’s physical description or may drive their strengths and unique abilities. Alternatively, they could be linked to the weaknesses and vulnerabilities for your character. As you use the template, you’ll have to decide if these aspects are important and what other parts of the template they relate to.


Social Connections

Relationships and romance could be an important part of the character’s growth arc. Detailing these out early in your planning could drive dialog, actions, and emotional outcomes throughout the story.

These social connections may be what drives the character’s motivations and goals, or maybe fuels their emotional growth arc.


Conflict

Every great story features struggles that push characters out of their comfort zones and force them to grow. Let’s examine how a character grapples with internal and external conflicts within the template.

First up, let’s look at internal conflict. [Character Name] is a complex individual plagued by her past, particularly an incident in which she was falsely accused of betraying her friends. This internal struggle manifests as crippling self-doubt and fear of being trusted again. Her inner turmoil leads to emotional conflicts with those around her and prevents her from fully embracing new relationships or opportunities.

Internal conflicts give your characters depth and complexity, making them more relatable and compelling for readers. They also offer opportunities for character growth as the characters confront their fears, face their personal demons, and learn to overcome their emotional struggles.

In the broader world, the external conflicts our character’s face is likely a significant element of the overall story. [Character Name’s] external conflicts come in the form of a powerful enemy seeking vengeance for the past betrayal that she didn’t commit. This adversary poses a grave threat not only to her personal safety but also to those closest to her. As [Character Name] navigates this dangerous situation, she must confront her inner fears and learn to rely on new allies if she wants to protect herself and those she cares about.

External conflicts provide the tension and suspense that keep your readers engaged in the story. They also offer opportunities for character development as the characters face challenges that test their limits, forcing them to grow and adapt.

This leads to planning the character arc.

Internal conflicts and character arcs create a powerful narrative that resonates with readers on an emotional level. They offer opportunities for characters to grow and evolve, providing satisfying closure and leaving the audience with a sense of fulfillment.

External conflicts offer opportunities for characters to prove themselves in challenging situations, highlighting their strengths and showing how they’ve evolved throughout their journey. They create an exciting narrative that keeps readers invested until the very end.

Here are these sections for my character Elara. She is still a work in progress, but is shaping up nicely. If you read through this, I hope you can get a sense of her story and how her interactions with the other characters would change her in a satisfying manner. I hope to publish Elara’s tale before the end of the year.


By skillfully balancing internal conflicts, external conflicts, and character arcs using the character template, you create a captivating, cohesive story that resonates with readers and leaves them eager for more adventures featuring your compelling characters!


This concludes the series on how I use my character template. I hope you’ve enjoyed it. Next month, I’ll be posting my Novel Outline tool that helps me map the journey my characters will travel. Stay tuned for more!


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Creating Compelling Characters (pt 5)

This six-part series will walk through the sections of my Character Template, describe how to use that template, and why you should go to this effort. I’ll sprinkle in some behind-the-scenes usage of the template as I’ve applied it to my latest writing efforts. My template is available for free to all subscribed members, so subscribe today and follow-along.


Those messy emotions

Welcome to our fifth installment in this series on creating compelling characters using the character template. Today, we’ll delve into the importance of emotional growth and progression in crafting complex, engaging stories that resonate with readers.


The template section

A character’s background shapes who they are and influences their motivations, actions, and decisions. For [Character Name], her upbringing in a secluded monastery after her village was destroyed instilled a strong sense of discipline and inner peace within her. This kind of background context not only adds depth to the story but also makes the character more relatable and authentic.

The background information you choose to put into the template may be sparse or very detailed. Elara’s background spans nearly half a page (too much to post here), but this is an excerpt of it:

A richly developed background provides valuable information about a character’s origins, family history, education, and notable relationships, allowing readers to better understand their motivations and emotional journeys. This background, with a simple mapping of the character’s history and relationships will inform and drive their emotional challenges and growth as well.


Template section

Emotional Challenges
Every character faces emotional challenges throughout their journey – be it grief, loss, betrayal, or fear. In our example, Character Name experiences profound grief and anger after losing her loved ones. This emotional turmoil not only adds depth to the story but also creates opportunities for character development.

Personal Epiphanies and Realizations
Emotional growth often involves gaining new insights about ourselves or the world around us. For Character Name, her emotional journey leads her to discover the true meaning of family, community, and forgiveness. Through these experiences, she learns valuable lessons and grows as a person.

Let’s look at my sample character once more. As you can see, big parts of her character arc have been fleshed out here. As you can imagine, this has given me the structure to make some interesting interpersonal conflicts in the plot as well as present key challenges to move the story forward.

So-What?
By focusing on emotional growth and progression in our characters, we create stories that resonate with readers and leave lasting impressions. These elements not only make our characters more relatable but also add depth and complexity to the narrative, ensuring a satisfying and rewarding reading experience for our audience.


Remember, every great story is fueled by compelling characters who evolve and grow throughout their journey. In our next installment of this series, we’ll explore how relationships play a crucial role in shaping our characters and adding depth to their stories. Stay tuned!


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