Thanksgiving in the USA

This week, on my regular posting day (Thursday), it is Thanksgiving in the USA. Despite the political divide, let’s remember the many blessings our nation enjoys. I don’t claim to have the most accurate assessment of our country’s condition, but I’m grateful that we’re still engaged in constructive dialogue, seeking peaceful solutions to our challenges. 

As we approach this Thanksgiving, I want to extend my warmest wishes to each and every one of you. May this day be filled with gratitude and joy, as we take a moment to reflect on the blessings in our lives. Let’s focus on the things we’re thankful for, rather than dwelling on our worries or anxieties about the world around us. Together, let’s create a positive and uplifting atmosphere, filled with love and appreciation. Happy Thanksgiving!


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WIP: Escape to the Unknown

Continuing to share the opening scenes from my current work in progress, Technomancer. This is the novel I completed during NaNoWriMo.


The alarm startled Finn, sending a surge of adrenalin through him and time seemed to slow. Should he duck and hide? The movement would attract attention, which he wanted to avoid. If he ran, they would surely follow. In a split second, as he sensed a head emerge from around the edge of the door, he decided.

He leaned forward and kissed the strange woman in his arms. She stiffened, as if to fight him off, but he wrapped her tightly in his arms, praying she would relax and not struggle. Thankfully, she did.

Her grip loosened, and she raised her fingers to the back of his head, almost caressing his scalp. Her lips were soft, inviting, and a delight to feel against his own even as he listened to the sounds mixed with the blaring of the alarm. No footsteps that he could hear.

Then the door slammed shut, and the alarm stopped, leaving the night eerily quiet in its aftermath.

Finn dropped his arms and stepped back.

“I’m sorry,” he said quickly, hoping to avoid any ire aimed his way.

The woman looked at him with … something. Longing? Appraisal? He was not sure what she was thinking but was glad she only nodded.

“We need to be going,” he said. “They may come back.”

“Why are they after you?” she asked in her soft tone, barely above a whisper.

“Long story,” he said. “They are after me because I’m after some bad people. I’ll tell you more later.”

He turned her toward the street and took her hand in his, glancing down at his phone clutched in his other hand. Still no warnings of surveillance.

Street, then turn left, he thought. Half a block to the subway. I can spoof the ticket gate, so no risks there. I’ll jam the cameras once we are on the platform. Depending on the trains, we’ll see how long we stay. Maybe the first train, possibly the second.

He knew every train made the agent’s search coverage expand exponentially. At this hour, any station would be busy. The subway was perfect to get lost in. They might revert to the surveillance feed, but his phone would thwart that.

He glanced out the side of his eye, admiring the calm, careful movements of his companion. She was beautiful and so graceful, as if every movement was planned and practiced until it was perfect. He had never seen someone like her before.

Then he realized the problem she would create. If the agents had seen her, she would stand out on surveillance footage. Her striking silver hair would be a beacon to them and an obvious lead to follow up on. Finn would either need to keep jamming their view, and risk creating a moving bubble of obscurity that would lead them to his neighborhood, or he had to find an alternative before they entered the subway. He would not leave her behind. He had given his word to help her.

Finn stopped her just short of the street.

“Here,” he said as he slipped off the canvas jacket with its soft fabric hood. He held it open for her. “We need to make you stand out less,” he said. “If we’re going to get away, I need you to wear this, and pull up the hood.”

She nodded and slipped her arms into the jacket. The teasing sight of her smooth skin barely covered by the thin gossamer fabric of her dress sent a rush of lust through him. Finn forced those thoughts away, even as the memory of their kiss bubbled up in his mind. The sight of her plunging neckline was enticing. It had been too long. Colleen had been the last girl in his life, and that was over three years ago. 

“Zip it up,” he said with a twinge of regret as he reached to pull the hood up and cover her head.

She shook her head, buttoned the jacket and then gathered her silver strands in a hand to make a simple twisted braid before tucking it inside the hood and hiding it from sight. Even in a drab work jacket, she looked spectacular to Finn.

“Okay,” he said. “We’re going out to the street and to the left. The subway is only a half block away. Hold on to my hand so we don’t get separated.”

She nodded and took his hand.

“I’m Elara,” she said softly as he stepped off.

Finn stopped. He looked at her and smiled. “I’m Finn.”


Elara let the strange sights swirl past her, absorbed more than noticed. The cacophony assaulted her ears as they descended smooth rock stairs into a bustling cavern filled with people moving with purpose. Finn waved his hand device at the standing cage blocking their path and then pushed her through in front of him. She panicked for a moment but forced the fear down. Her feet clung to something on the floor, and she marveled at the scents assaulting her from all the people hurrying on their way.

Down another set of stairs, then into a long tunnel with a broad platform lining a lower portion. This must be the subway Finn had mentioned. Why not just call it a tunnel?

Then a strange sound, like a dull roar of water, could be heard in the tunnel. A moment later, as light appeared, followed by a moving string of metal and glass boxes. The contraption stopped by the platform and doors slid open as if by magic. People emerged from the metal beast, and then people on the platform walked on.

Elara felt a sinking in her stomach as she watched the door close. In all the realms of Elysia, she had never heard of such a strange device.

Where was she?


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NaNoWriMo: Week Three

Victory!

I’m participating in NaNoWriMo this year. I’m focusing on finishing the first draft of my work in progress, tentatively titled Technomancer. I’ve shared some of the character background and opening chapters of the work here as well.

This week, I reached my goal of 50,000 words in the month, reaching 50,091 on Nov 20th.

  • I’m writing earlier in the day, with most of my writing between 8:00 and 9:00 AM.
  • My peak day is still a Saturday with 6,099 words written.
  • I’m averaging 2,529 words per day.

The novel is not yet “complete” in first draft form, since I have a few threads to tie of in the epilogue portion of the book, but it is very close. Overall word count is currently 94,523 and one goal was to keep it around 100k words or less.

I will post the final chapter of the first part of the book as a WIP: posting next Monday, and hope to have the first revision on the draft completed before the end of the year.

A few things I’ve learned during this 20-day journey:

  • Having a regular writing cadence helps me stay focused on moving the story forward. Yes, I wanted to keep pace on the goal I set to be done this week, but more importantly, I was able to write in the mornings and plan the next installment as I got on with life in the afternoons.
  • The structure of the challenge also forced me to embrace the idea of starting before I was ready and stopping before I was done. Continuing to develop this habit and practice is something I’ll focus on going forward.
  • I had a rough outline that helped guide me, but wish I had more fully plotted out the different character arcs I wanted. I’ll be revisiting each of those in the editing process.

Would I do it again? Absolutely. I encourage anyone thinking of writing a novel to jump into next years’ challenge, or just do it and start now. Set a goal and start writing!


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WIP: Finn’s Thrilling Escape: A Scene from Technomancer

Continuing to share the opening scenes from my current work in progress, Technomancer. This is the novel I’m working to complete during NaNoWriMo.


Finn could hear the agents in the stair well high above him. He kept his steps light as he hugged the wall and avoided exposing himself should they look over the flimsy railing of this escape route. His shoes were sturdy and laced tight, with rubberized soles that absorbed the light sound of his footfalls. He pulled the hood of his canvas work coat up over his head, hiding his dark, wavy mop of hair. He needed to trim it back to the close-cropped cut he usually kept. For now, he let it grow out, just in case he needed a hasty haircut to alter his appearance.

He thought about his options as he descended as quickly as he could without alerting his pursuit. Two doors were at the bottom of this stairwell. One would go back into the maintenance and service area of the building. The other into the alley separating this building from its neighbor. He would be exposed in the alley, at least until he could make it to the street, but the maintenance area only had one other exit, aside from the service elevator which was most likely being monitored by now.

He reached the ground floor and stopped, listening. How much time did he have? The slap-slap-slap of leather on stairs gave little sense of distance, but he guessed they were at least six or seven floors above him. The exit was in the middle of the alley. If he was lucky, he could make the street before they reached the floor.

He eased the doorway open. He had carefully oiled the hinges of doors along all his escape routes days ago and bypassed alarms. Finn glanced at his phone. No active surveillance in the area. The agents should have deployed drones or spy-cams around the building before trying to catch him. Maybe they did not want a record of their actions. It was a sobering thought.

He slipped through the door and closed it carefully. No loud bangs or thuds telling his pursuers which way he had gone. He tapped an icon on his phone and felt the electronic contact in the doorframe release. If they opened the door, the alarm would sound. It might convince them to resume their search inside.

“Now just make it to the street,” he said softly.

He stepped around the garbage dumpster and started to jog toward the end of the alley. The street he was heading for was on the opposite block of the entrance they must have used to reach him. Getting to the street, he could turn south and be down on the subway in half-a-block. Once down there, they could never follow him. He just needed a crowd to mingle in and activate his phone, then surveillance would be fuzzed for twenty yards around him. They would have no hope of following all the people suddenly hidden. Hop on a train, stop the jammer in a tunnel, and he would be one of the anonymous masses once more.

He heard the soft sobbing and slowed to locate its source. No one was around, but the sound grabbed his attention. Then he saw her. She shimmered, as if coming into focus in the night.

Her silver hair shone in the faint light of the alley, amplifying moonlight that was hidden by the tall buildings and scattered clouds above the city. She was sitting on a milk crate, with her knees hugged to her chest, wearing a light silky dress of blue and green. He noticed the silver bracelets on her ankles with jewels showing. She would not have them long, if she stayed around this part of the city.

She looked up at him as he stopped his flight. Her long, cascading silver hair fell in waves around her shoulders, framing her sharp features and piercing emerald eyes. The delicate curves of her face accentuated by the high cheekbones, giving her an air of regality, while her lips were full of promise, set in determination as she stifled her crying. Her complexion was pale, with faint freckles just visible in the poor light, giving her a youthful and sun-kissed appearance. 

Finn shook his head, careful not to dislodge his glasses. Chivalry warred with self-preservation. His pursuers could come out any moment.

“Are you alright?” he asked, glancing back over his shoulder.

“No,” she said in a flat tone, as if it should be obvious, she had problems.

Finn sighed. He didn’t have time for this. He also knew it was not in his nature to leave her in distress. Maybe it was a simple issue, he thought.

“Look, I want to help you, but I’ve got my own problems. Do you want help or not?”

She nodded and stood. She was almost his height. “I need to find a man I don’t know, in a place I’ve never been, and my goddess has abandoned me. Can you help?”

He shook his head. A crazy woman. He was on the run for his life and stopped to help a crazy woman. It didn’t matter if she was beautiful and mysterious, she was going to get him caught and killed, or worse.

“Possibly,” he said without thinking. He knew he could solve most challenges, given time to think. It was his habit to not shy away from any problem. “But I can’t do it here, and I can’t get caught here. If you come with me, I promise to try to help. Will that work?”

The woman flung her arms around him just as the night was shattered by the piercing blare of a door’s security alarm going off. 


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NaNoWriMo: Week Two

I’m participating in NaNoWriMo this year. I’m focusing on finishing the first draft of my work in progress, tentatively titled Technomancer. I’ve shared some of the character background and opening chapters of the work here as well.

This week, my pace has fallen some, but I’m still ahead with a planned completion date of Nov 20th. My current stats:

  • 35,711 words written in 14 days, (71.4% of goal)
  • I’m writing earlier in the day, with most of my writing between 8:00 and 9:00 AM.
  • My peak day is still a Saturday with 6,099 words written.
  • I’m averaging 2,550 words per day.

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WIP: Forsaken Powers – Elara’s Quest

Continuing to share the opening scenes from my current work in progress, Technomancer. This is the novel I’m working to complete during NaNoWriMo.


A palpable stench assaulted Elara’s senses, a noxious blend of decay and filth. The pungent tang of rotting food mingled with the rank aroma of spoiled garbage, its sickly sweetness clinging to her nostrils and forcing her to wake, gagging. Decomposing organic matter gave way to a sharper, more pungent smell – the unmistakable stink of putrefying meat and fish. The sour, acrid odor of urine added another layer to the cacophony, a reminder that this was a place where nature fought a constant battle against decay and filth. It was a smell that spoke of neglect, disarray, and the unyielding passage of time.

Elara groaned, and forced her eyes open, afraid to see what foul place she had been thrown into now.

“Goddess, help me,” she pleaded softly as she spotted the barest hint of moonlight edging its way into the filthy alleyway she awoke in. Garbage was obvious in the large metal bins pushed against one wall. Dirty rainwater, she hoped it was water, puddled the rough street, and she heard strange sounds from the distant opening. A few lights shown through the mouth of the narrow passage.

She took hold of herself, realizing she was still naked except for the silver anklets with their tiny jewels and moonstones. She reached out with her mind, seeking the cool comforting connection to the powers her goddess had granted. The barest trickle of power would clothe her. It was one of the first lessons an acolyte learned, weaving the moon beams into clothes.

For the first time since learning the weave, her goddess’ power eluded her. The loss of her connection hit her as hard as the wizard’s fist had. She struggled to sit up and hugged her knees to her tightly. Where was her patron? Why had the connection been lost? How?

Alone. She could sense none of her sisters in the order. She could not feel Mother Nightbloom, the only woman she had granted the appellation of mother. Elara had always had someone of the order on the periphery of her awareness. Even in the dungeon of obsidian, she could feel a tenuous connection to the women of the temple in the Enchanted Forest. Of course, there it had been nearly overwhelmed by the emotions of the other prisoners. Now, it was simply absent. The magnitude of her loss sent a shiver through her soul, and she felt unbidden tears touch her face.

Alone. Not only were her friends and sisters gone, but her goddess was also as well. The usual sense of comfort and reassurance was absent.

She sucked in a deep breath of the putrid air, wishing for some hint of home, only to remind herself of the many lessons from her training.

“Have pity for others, but it has no place in your actions,” Mother Nightbloom had instructed. “Do not waste time pitying your circumstances, do something about them!”

She focused inward, seeking the place where she felt the peace of the goddess. This too, she had been deeply trained in. Her years as an initiate had prepared her mind and body for the trials of being an acolyte. Her years as an acolyte had honed powers that mere mortals could only imagine. She had reached the final trials to be anointed a priestess five years earlier than most expected to achieve that rank. She would not be deterred.

Elara reached out once more, focusing on the memory of the power granted to her. She resisted the urge to strain for it, opening herself and waiting until she felt the lightest of touches on her awareness. The power was there, but faint like an echo in her mind. Regardless, she willed that trickle to manifest. She felt the soft caress of cloth on her skin and opened her eyes.

It was not the full gown of a priestess as she had envisioned, but a short dress of blues and greens. At least it covered her nakedness. She felt drained from the effort but forced herself to stand and move away from the stench of the container hiding her from the main street. A crate of some strange material was a few steps further down the alley. She sat, exhausted, but determined to try once more to weave the moonbeams.

Before she could reach the meditative state of calm again, a new sensation intruded upon her. A longing, not for the goddess, but for a man. She relaxed her mind, trying to fathom who the man was. It was not the magician who had raped her before casting her out, that much she was certain of. She shuddered at the thought of the evil man’s touch even as she realized she could feel his seed leaking from within her. She needed a bath.

No, the man she sought was not a magician, but someone of power from this world. She knew she needed to find him. A man of power, but she could think of no name, no face, no way of identifying him. She only felt the need to search and find.

A geas! That evil bastard was using her to find someone, she realized.

She knew of spells to impose a geas. Only the highest priestesses were allowed to use them, but she knew the signs. The flames of her anger were blown brighter. Her goddess had truly forsaken her if she could not fight this compulsion on her mind. While she wanted to resist the pity welling up in her throat, her loss was all consuming. For the first time since being raised as an acolyte, she cried with the nearly silent sobs from her childhood.

Alone and abandoned again.


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NaNoWriMo Update : First Week

I’m participating in NaNoWriMo this year. I’m focusing on finishing the first draft of my work in progress, tentatively titled Technomancer. I’ve shared some of the character background and opening chapters of the work here earlier as well.

I’m pleased to share that one week into the challenge, I am 170% ahead of my planned goal pace. I aim to finish 50,000 words by the end of the month.

A few other facts from the project tracking at NaNoWriMo:

  • I’m averaging 3,268 words per day
  • I do most of my writing between 9 AM and 10 AM
  • My peak writing day was a Saturday, with 6,099 words written.
  • If I keep up this pace, I’ll reach my goal by Nov 15th.

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Discussing Excerpt Twelve: Marketing Mondays

This week’s post is the opening prologue for Cosimo. I chose to use the prologue of the book for a few reasons:

  • Firstly, I launched a promotion for the Kindle version of the book on Amazon this week, so naturally wanted to highlight it.
  • Secondly, the prologue sets up the basis for the universe, and the colony that emerges from mankind’s flight from the Sol-system.
  • Finally, at 435 words, the prologue is intended to intrigue the reader without bogging them down with lots of details and characters. It tries to set the stakes for the story, and hints at some of the challenges they will face and overcome.

The prologue could be removed from the story. However, losing it would make it more difficult for readers to orient themselves on the world that unfolds in later chapters.

Enjoy the excerpt and I hope you take advantage of this week’s sale on the book.


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Cosimo: The Fight for Humanity’s Future Begins

I’ve mentioned before that Cosimo is my most problematic story when it comes to marketing and promoting the tale. Today, I’ll share another “non-spicy” excerpt, actually the prologue of the book, which sets the stage for the universe the story is told in. Additionally, my Kindle Version of Cosimo is on-sale for this week, so if the opening appeals to you, check out the full story and let me know what you think.


Ayako watched as Kgosi, her husband, descended from the side hatch of the shuttle.  The crew was bustling around them, unloading cargo with a sense of urgency that echoed through the hangar bay. She understood the gravity of their task: the seeds they carried were the key to the survival and future prosperity of their human colony on a distant planet. But her concern went beyond the importance of the cargo. The sweat on Kgosi’s brow, the weariness in his eyes, testified to the immense struggle they had faced on Earth. The cold climate of Norway had only added to their challenge.

The fight against the artificially intelligent machines had been more brutal than anticipated. The raid on the Svalbard Global Seed Vault had been a last hope to secure greater biodiversity for their new home. The mission’s success came at great cost, as they knew all too well. Kgosi had left her with a kiss that mixed both farewell and determination. Ayako had listened to the decoded transmission from the mission, her heart heavy with the knowledge that this was the end for the crew on Earth.

The New Horizon, their spacecraft, had been moved to the Apollo asteroids to complete its loadout and prepare for the final battle against the home world. The dinosaur killers they had launched from the belt were already enroute to Earth, leaving no chance of rescue or salvation for those left behind. Free men of this generation would never touch foot on their birthplace again.

Ayako knew that Kgosi carried a burden far greater than the physical one he showed. As the future leader of the colony, he had been at the forefront of the debates and discussions about their actions. The decision to destroy the machines had weighed heavily on him, a cold calculus of saving a select few while condemning the rest to a fiery end. It was a burden no man should bear, yet Ayako trusted that Kgosi would help them build a new world based on wisdom and compassion, free from the hate and prejudice that had led to the weaponization of technology in the first place.

Kgosi turned to look back at the shuttle, his eyes meeting Ayako’s. His smile gave her hope. Despite the weight of their decisions and the sacrifices they had made, he believed in their future. And with that belief, she knew they could build a better world, one where mankind learned from its mistakes and created a new home filled with peace and prosperity. Together, they would face the challenges ahead and ensure the success of their colony.


This excerpt highlights some of the non-erotic basis for the world of the story. Subscribers can read an additional “spicy” excerpt from the book and everyone can enjoy the discussion of that excerpt as well.


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Flash Fiction: Applying the MICE Model

I mentioned previously that I’ve been watching Brandon Sanderson’s lectures on writing Science Fiction and Fantasy at BYU. Lecture #7 features a guest lecturer, Mary Robinette Kowal. In the lecture, she covers the MICE quotient and has the class apply it to a piece of flash fiction. This struck me as a perfect writing exercise to add to my own practice, even though I have little practice or experience writing flash fiction. Let’s take a look at what she shares.

MICE

The MICE quotient is shorthand for the types of story, story-arc, and conflict you can have in a story.

M is for Milieu. In Milieu stories, your character enters a new space at the beginning of the tale and exits the space at the conclusion. The conflict of the story revolves around figuring out a way out of the space.

I is for Inquiry. Inquiry stories start with a question or a mystery to be solved and end when the question is answered. Conflict is the process of trying to find those answers, with no luck.

C is for Character. In the simplest form, character stories start when a character is unhappy with themselves or their lot in life, and end when they have new understanding of themselves or their situation. Conflict comes from the things that keep them in their starting situation. Character stories are inherently inward focused with internal conflict.

E is for Event. Event stories are action. They start with a status quo and end when a new status quo is reached. Conflict comes through the efforts and set-backs that prevent the character from reaching the new status quo. Event stories are focused on the external conflict.

Most stories are made up of multiple threads from the MICE quotient. Nonetheless, it is important that the threads be concluded in a logical manner to be satisfying to the reader. This “nesting” of concerns implies that if you open with an Inquiry element, then open a Milieu element, that you resolve the Milieu element before you conclude the Inquiry item. (Jump to the 7:55 mark of the lecture to see and hear a great explanation on this.)

The Challenge

After explaining the concepts of MICE and how to apply them to stories, she takes the class through an exercise to write a 250-word flash fiction story. Her example makes a great writing exercise you should consider.

The Opening: The first three sentences of the story must orient the reader and establish the “who”, “where”, and genre of the piece. This will be an Action-driven Opening. For her in-class exercise, she provides the class the genre (Science Fiction), the “who” (a jockey), and the “where” (a coaster). She guides them to include a sensory detail in the location description, and an adjective to define the attitude of the character. Finally, the opening sentence for the character will include the action they are doing. For the genre sentence, she asks them to include a genre specific detail that is unique. She allows them three minutes to write three sentences and challenges them to use fewer sentences while still delivering the elements of who, where, and what.

The Conflict: The next part of the story is the conflict. She states that the next sentence should introduce the conflict; what is the goal and why to set up the try-fail cycle. And then, once we know what they are trying to do, what is stopping them? This sets up the character’s try-fail cycle. She gives them two minutes to write these next two sentences.

Try-Fail: Trying something and failing takes on two general forms; “Yes, but” / “No, and”. “Yes, but” implies they tried something, did not reach their goal, but made some progress toward it (two steps forward, one-step back) while “No, and” implies they failed, and had an additional set-back. Multiple try-fail cycles build tension in the story and help readers care more about the conflict and character. She gives the class five sentences and five minutes to write several try-fail cycles in the story.

The closing mode: At this point, we’re about two-thirds into the story. We have five sentences setting up the situation and five sentences illustrating the conflicts using try-fail cycles. We are now ready to start resolving some of the conflict. This takes the form of “Yes, and” narratives along with “No, but”. These structures allow progress toward the goal and conflict resolution. In short, this is the shift from try-fail to try-succeed. She allows five sentences and five minutes to write the solution to the problem.

The wrap: solving the problem likely does not provide a complete resolution to the story; it needs to wrap up the final MICE nested element, and bring the story to a satisfying conclusion. The class is allowed three sentences to wrap the story, mirroring their opening.

One point that is made during the lecture is that the MICE quotient scales. It can be used for flash fiction as well as epic fantasy. Obviously, the number of threads and depth of nesting will be different for various formats, but it is an interesting observation. Maybe a chapter is really four flash-fiction stories weaved and nested together. Maybe a novel is fifty such threads. Using the structured thought approach shared in the lecture means you have tools to write long or short fiction.

Again, I encourage you to watch the video lecture and think about how you can apply the lessons there to anything you are writing.


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